1. This sentence has five words. Here are five more words. Five-word sentences are fine. But several together become monotonous. Listen to what is happening. The writing is getting boring. The sound of it drones. It’s like a stuck record. The ear demands some variety. Now listen. I vary the…

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    This sentence has five words. Here are five more words. Five-word sentences are fine. But several together become...
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    The full thing is somewhere on my blog, but…yeah. Good luck finding it. :P
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    Why, Tumblr? Why must you cut off the original post? That’s what I wanted to share. -_-
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    right here should be...every writer should learn. That is, if they want
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